Does everyone remember the Japanese art of poetry the Hiaku?

Format is 5, 7 then 5 syllables in 3 seperate units,,

example

"My Kombi is blue
It is not that happy now
She need an engine"

OK,, so see if you can do better..:puke

Winner will be decided by on the 5th January,,,

Judged by me & the missus..

Rules is:
One entry per person (you may edit and change yours)
Must be VW related (this means you Frenzix,, lol)

Good luck,,,

1st prize is (see pic)
Imagine the envy your fellow dubbers will have when you slap on you "automatic" badge,,, change the way you drive in an instant !! no more clutch trouble !!
Do you only have an automatic divers lic? then this is the prize for you !!

It is an automatic,, but I do have to be here !!!

[ Edited on 4-12-2005 by pi22api22a ]

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[ Edited on 5-1-2006 by pi22api22a ]

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my bug is very dead
rusted gutted stripped apart
hope i fix it soon

hows that? i suck at creative writing, only good with metal paint and the like, school was never my thing, long live the shed/garage/car hold/front lawn!

[ Edited on 4-12-05 by 1stcarbug ]

bloody car won't start
should not have pulled it apart
where did this wire go


thats the best i got
this is a true bloody story
i better win prize

festy is dung-heap
car spent money too much on
people laugh at him :P

where's peter leonard?
he's number 1 haiku king
oops it's not BA

bug bus ghia van
for all woman man and child
love pleasure and pain
vader

[ Edited on 5-12-2005 by akean1 ]

When you see a Bug,
Hit your friend (not hard!) and say
"Punch Bug, no returns!"

:P

i love my mummy
she makes my bed at night time
i love you mummy

i love my daddy
he tucks me in at night time
why did you leave dad

mummy says dads gay
i say i am happy too
not that gay timmy

oh enough of my problems, i just read its supposed to be VW related.. dammit

i love my veedubb
it does brake down at night time
i love you veedubb

[ Edited on 4-12-05 by frenzix ]

LOL

My beetle has bling bling
I drive along and sing sing
I sound real bad bad

LOL,,,,

This comp will definetly bring out the poets!!!

Fahrvergnugen Thoughts
Feelings of Great Happiness
Sheer Driving Pleasure

[ Edited on 5-12-2005 by ColumBUS ]

Adolf want peeps car
Ferdinand built proto
Poms save idea for world

emo hiku

die die die die die
cut cut slash blood bleeding die
my mum hates me

i am emo child
listen to me crying loud
sob sob whinge cry cry

i won't change lightbulb
let me cry in the darkness
very bad emo jokes

Hahahaha Good stuff Col-emo-Bus!

dak dak dak dak dak
dak dak dak dak dak dak dak
dak dak dak dak dak

Ahahahahahaha hahahaha hahahahahaha now that's awesome Purple Martin!

Shouldn't it be:

Whirr whirr start splutter
Dak dak dak clunk thunk dak dak
Cough choke dak dak BANG!

:P

heh, OK mine is the dream, yours is the reality!

putting along road
watch flames from the back window
this makes me quite sad

ah yes,, great work all,, keep it up!!

Still looking for an appropriate 1st prize,,,,

daave

Just bought a kombi,
She is a bit rusty tho,
But thats half the fun...

My car is Edith
Little buggar stole my heart
now she mine i smile

Aww... that's a cute one! :P

Bugs, bays, so much see.
Veedub style is one huge scene..
Splits, Ghias, Type threes.


couldnt help myself....



[ Edited on 9/12/2005 by twoguns ]

change tyres, adjust brakes.
what is that funny odour?
no more pub carpark


tik thud ding crunch BANG
stopped car, hot sun, wheres tiewire?
stupid bug pooheap :puke


kahmal say to us
why are people so unkind?
he not drive festy

Hahahaha Stupid bug pooheap Hahahaha *wiping laughter tears away* :P

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Veedub resto's rock
Can cost way too much money
Hooray for credit