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 pi22api22a
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| posted on December 15th, 2005 at 03:22 PM |
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Doesnt have to ryme
In fact anything is fine
If you have the time !!!!!
(not bad eh?):beer
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ColumBUS
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| posted on December 15th, 2005 at 03:27 PM |
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rhyme is avoided in traditional haiku. well not avoided as such, its just that there are so many better things to do in a three line poem than
rhyme.
i believe the idea was to create a poem so simple and yet so powerful that one could be overwhelmed in three short lines.
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71superbug
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| posted on December 16th, 2005 at 07:42 PM |
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yeah thats what i thought...and attempted. but we will see how mine goes.
Anthony
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pi22api22a
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| posted on December 22nd, 2005 at 09:03 AM |
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bump bump bump bump bump
bump bump bump bump bump bump bump
bump bump bump bump bump!
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PrettyBlueBug
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| posted on December 22nd, 2005 at 09:15 AM |
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Xmas is right here,
Hope you've bought your Dub something...
Preferably BLING!
:P
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twoguns
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simply aircooled
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| posted on December 22nd, 2005 at 10:07 AM |
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split screen shows my soul.
character, feeling, style.
expressed in my ride.
:tree :tree :tree :tree
Simply Cruzin'...
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boxofrabbits
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| posted on December 22nd, 2005 at 11:51 AM |
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i feel i am doomed
for a long life of cursing
german engineers |
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boxofrabbits
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| posted on December 22nd, 2005 at 11:59 AM |
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Over speed bumps not
Sparking at every corner
Can see under cars |
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boxofrabbits
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| posted on December 22nd, 2005 at 12:02 PM |
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Speakers in the back
LCD screen in the front
No damn space for friends |
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boxofrabbits
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| posted on December 22nd, 2005 at 12:06 PM |
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Stripped, Primed, Sandblasted
Masking off doors and windscreen
Damn, Wrong bloody paint |
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boxofrabbits
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| posted on December 22nd, 2005 at 12:08 PM |
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Live life all alone
Just me and my Volkswagen
Wife said her or bug |
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boxofrabbits
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| posted on December 22nd, 2005 at 12:12 PM |
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Should be frowned upon
An unhealthy obsession
Fixing cars costs bucks
hehe this is fun, i'll stop now |
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PrettyBlueBug
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| posted on December 22nd, 2005 at 12:18 PM |
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You'll need to pick which one is your entry to the comp out of all those! :P
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boxofrabbits
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| posted on December 22nd, 2005 at 01:07 PM |
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| Quote: | Originally
posted by Pretty_Blue_Bug
You'll need to pick which one is your entry to the comp out of all those! :P
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first one i reckon |
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pi22api22a
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| posted on January 3rd, 2006 at 01:06 PM |
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not long to go now !!
will be a hard one to judge,,,
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DIY-DUB
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| posted on January 3rd, 2006 at 01:14 PM |
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yay there is a prize
vwdubya automatic badge
yay i dont need one
this is gr8, keepin everyone happy and thinkin hard about it, wouldnt of thought all of us were this creative and poetic
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PrettyBlueBug
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| posted on January 3rd, 2006 at 02:29 PM |
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Bugger 'bout the prize...
Got one, my Bug's an Auto.
I want 'Stickshift' script!
:P
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pi22api22a
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| posted on January 5th, 2006 at 12:50 PM |
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Its the final day,,,, entries close 5pm
Will announce the winner at 9pm - good luck
daaaave:beer
(I'm so proud of you all)
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bugger
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| posted on January 5th, 2006 at 03:37 PM |
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On the open road,
Dub's screamin' along the tar,
OH SHIT NO BRAKES!
Commited dubber..... My wife thinks I ought to be commited!
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david
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| posted on January 5th, 2006 at 03:37 PM |
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little boy blue
he needed the money
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bugger
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| posted on January 5th, 2006 at 03:42 PM |
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My Kombi's a beaut' ute,
Great for a shag or a root,
Weboth go real HARD!
Commited dubber..... My wife thinks I ought to be commited!
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PrettyBlueBug
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| posted on January 5th, 2006 at 03:44 PM |
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Is that wishful thinking?  :P
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empi
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| posted on January 5th, 2006 at 04:00 PM |
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My vw is cool
so dont be a fool
look and you'll drool
empi
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jenz58
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| posted on January 5th, 2006 at 04:55 PM |
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Too long away
Four pages too late
Now my moment has arrived
Too quickly to pass
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jenz58
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| posted on January 5th, 2006 at 05:00 PM |
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Vent window, open Goldie
Summer sun, cool breeze
The sound of crickets sooth the soul
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jenz58
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| posted on January 5th, 2006 at 05:02 PM |
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Smiles on faces
People point
A beetle has passed 
Hmmmm it's amazing how one tiny little spelling error can change the whole image
[ Edited on 5-1-2006 by jenz58 ]
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jenz58
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| posted on January 5th, 2006 at 05:03 PM |
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OMG this could become addictive
OOPS there was a formula :jesus
Shit happens :rudolf
[ Edited on 5-1-2006 by jenz58 ]
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pi22api22a
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| posted on January 5th, 2006 at 08:43 PM |
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The Winner is .......
OK, sorry for the delay (much heated discussion about winner),,,
Thanks to everyone for your entry, I can't believe how much response this got!
But the winner is..............
bugeyedbabe !!!!
My car is Edith
Little buggar stole my heart
now she mine i smile
Congrats,, send me your address and I'll post off you luxury prize!!!
Special mention to PurpleMartin with his entry
(you nearly won with that one)
dak dak dak dak dak
dak dak dak dak dak dak dak
dak dak dak dak dak
and to twoguns,,,
(you were close, but 5, 7, 5,,)
split screen shows my soul. (5)
character, feeling, style. (6)
expressed in my ride (5)
Cheers all,, and thanks
daaave:beer
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PrettyBlueBug
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| posted on January 6th, 2006 at 07:10 AM |
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Awww.... congrats bugeyedbabe!! :kiss Definitely a worthy winner.
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bugeyedbabe
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| posted on January 6th, 2006 at 09:38 AM |
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thank you thank you...
lol
I honestly didnt think i had any chance of winning considering some of the entries. I especially loved two guns, and the multiples place in by some
of the others.....it was nice to see so many positive things being posted.
And I only jumped on here today to see which of you guys won.
but thanks anyway.
btw...edith really does make me smile :P
dubless. 
And who the helled parked the Mitsubishi "Prancer" under my
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