VW Haiku Competition ! And the Winner is................................................

pi22api22a · 2005-12-04T02:40:02+00:00

Does everyone remember the Japanese art of poetry the Hiaku? Format is 5, 7 then 5 syllables in 3 seperate units,, example "My Kombi is blue It is not that happy now She need an engine" OK,, so see if you can do better..:puke Winner will be decided by on the 5th January,,, Judged by me & the missus.. Rules is: One entry per person (you may edit and change yours) Must be VW related (this means you Frenzix,, lol) Good luck,,, 1st prize is (see pic) Imagine the envy your fellow dubbers will have when you slap on you "automatic" badge,,, change the way you drive in an instant !! no more clutch trouble !! Do you only have an automatic divers lic? then this is the prize for you !! It is an automatic,, but I do have to be here !!! [ Edited on 4-12-2005 by pi22api22a ] [ Edited on 4-12-2005 by pi22api22a ] [ Edited on 21-12-2005 by pi22api22a ] [ Edited on 21-12-2005 by pi22api22a ] [ Edited on 5-1-2006 by pi22api22a ] [ Edited on 5-1-2006 by pi22api22a ]

pi22api22a Officially Full-On Dubber

345 posts · joined Nov 2003 · 15 Dec 2005, 3:22 pm

#438518

Doesnt have to ryme

In fact anything is fine

If you have the time !!!!!

(not bad eh?):beer

ColumBUS Hail To The Bus Driver!

3,601 posts · joined Sep 2004 · 15 Dec 2005, 3:27 pm

#438522

rhyme is avoided in traditional haiku. well not avoided as such, its just that there are so many better things to do in a three line poem than rhyme.
i believe the idea was to create a poem so simple and yet so powerful that one could be overwhelmed in three short lines.

71superbug The Itch Itcher

1,184 posts · joined May 2004 · 16 Dec 2005, 7:42 pm

#438878

yeah thats what i thought...and attempted. but we will see how mine goes.

Anthony

pi22api22a Officially Full-On Dubber

345 posts · joined Nov 2003 · 22 Dec 2005, 9:03 am

#440311

bump bump bump bump bump

bump bump bump bump bump bump bump

bump bump bump bump bump!

PrettyBlueBug Almost over it...

2,032 posts · joined May 2005 · 22 Dec 2005, 9:15 am

#440315

Xmas is right here,
Hope you've bought your Dub something...
Preferably BLING!

:P

twoguns simply aircooled

4,275 posts · joined Nov 2002 · 22 Dec 2005, 10:07 am

#440333

split screen shows my soul.
character, feeling, style.
expressed in my ride.

:tree :tree :tree :tree

Simply Cruzin'...

boxofrabbits Seriously Crusin Dubber

145 posts · joined Dec 2005 · 22 Dec 2005, 11:51 am

#440362

i feel i am doomed
for a long life of cursing
german engineers

boxofrabbits Seriously Crusin Dubber

145 posts · joined Dec 2005 · 22 Dec 2005, 11:59 am

#440367

Over speed bumps not
Sparking at every corner
Can see under cars

boxofrabbits Seriously Crusin Dubber

145 posts · joined Dec 2005 · 22 Dec 2005, 12:02 pm

#440368

Speakers in the back
LCD screen in the front
No damn space for friends

boxofrabbits Seriously Crusin Dubber

145 posts · joined Dec 2005 · 22 Dec 2005, 12:06 pm

#440371

Stripped, Primed, Sandblasted
Masking off doors and windscreen
Damn, Wrong bloody paint

boxofrabbits Seriously Crusin Dubber

145 posts · joined Dec 2005 · 22 Dec 2005, 12:08 pm

#440374

Live life all alone
Just me and my Volkswagen
Wife said her or bug

boxofrabbits Seriously Crusin Dubber

145 posts · joined Dec 2005 · 22 Dec 2005, 12:12 pm

#440377

Should be frowned upon
An unhealthy obsession
Fixing cars costs bucks

hehe this is fun, i'll stop now

PrettyBlueBug Almost over it...

2,032 posts · joined May 2005 · 22 Dec 2005, 12:18 pm

#440382

You'll need to pick which one is your entry to the comp out of all those! :P

boxofrabbits Seriously Crusin Dubber

145 posts · joined Dec 2005 · 22 Dec 2005, 1:07 pm

#440397

Pretty_Blue_Bug wrote:You'll need to pick which one is your entry to the comp out of all those! :P

first one i reckon

pi22api22a Officially Full-On Dubber

345 posts · joined Nov 2003 · 3 Jan 2006, 1:06 pm

#443447

not long to go now !!

will be a hard one to judge,,,

DIY-DUB Custom Title Time!

1,591 posts · joined Apr 2004 · 3 Jan 2006, 1:14 pm

#443449

yay there is a prize
vwdubya automatic badge
yay i dont need one
🙂
this is gr8, keepin everyone happy and thinkin hard about it, wouldnt of thought all of us were this creative and poetic

PrettyBlueBug Almost over it...

2,032 posts · joined May 2005 · 3 Jan 2006, 2:29 pm

#443469

Bugger 'bout the prize...
Got one, my Bug's an Auto.
I want 'Stickshift' script!

:P

pi22api22a Officially Full-On Dubber

345 posts · joined Nov 2003 · 5 Jan 2006, 12:50 pm

#444253

Its the final day,,,, entries close 5pm

Will announce the winner at 9pm - good luck

daaaave:beer

(I'm so proud of you all)

bugger Commited Dubber

71 posts · joined Oct 2003 · 5 Jan 2006, 3:37 pm

#444285

On the open road,
Dub's screamin' along the tar,
OH SHIT NO BRAKES!

Commited dubber..... My wife thinks I ought to be commited!

david Custom Title Time!

1,013 posts · joined Nov 2002 · 5 Jan 2006, 3:37 pm

#444286

he needed the money

bugger Commited Dubber

71 posts · joined Oct 2003 · 5 Jan 2006, 3:42 pm

#444289

My Kombi's a beaut' ute,
Great for a shag or a root,
Weboth go real HARD!

Commited dubber..... My wife thinks I ought to be commited!

PrettyBlueBug Almost over it...

2,032 posts · joined May 2005 · 5 Jan 2006, 3:44 pm

#444290

Is that wishful thinking? 😂 😉 :P

empi Compulsive Aussie Vee Dubber

4,131 posts · joined Aug 2002 · 5 Jan 2006, 4:00 pm

#444295

My vw is cool
so dont be a fool
look and you'll drool

empi

"If at first you don't succeed, skydiving is not for you." - Anonymous 🥷

jenz58 Postal Menace

9,121 posts · joined Aug 2002 · 5 Jan 2006, 4:55 pm

#444307

Too long away
Four pages too late
Now my moment has arrived
Too quickly to pass

"All you need is trust and a little bit of pixie dust!"

http://forums.aussieveedubbers.com/viewtopic.php?tid=22473
http://forums.aussieveedubbers.com/viewtopic.php?tid=56558#pid535643

...so I don't loose the links to my rides again hehehe

jenz58 Postal Menace

9,121 posts · joined Aug 2002 · 5 Jan 2006, 5:00 pm

#444308

Vent window, open Goldie
Summer sun, cool breeze
The sound of crickets sooth the soul

"All you need is trust and a little bit of pixie dust!"

http://forums.aussieveedubbers.com/viewtopic.php?tid=22473
http://forums.aussieveedubbers.com/viewtopic.php?tid=56558#pid535643

...so I don't loose the links to my rides again hehehe

jenz58 Postal Menace

9,121 posts · joined Aug 2002 · 5 Jan 2006, 5:02 pm

#444309

Smiles on faces
People point
A beetle has passed 👍

Hmmmm it's amazing how one tiny little spelling error can change the whole image 😉

[ Edited on 5-1-2006 by jenz58 ]

"All you need is trust and a little bit of pixie dust!"

http://forums.aussieveedubbers.com/viewtopic.php?tid=22473
http://forums.aussieveedubbers.com/viewtopic.php?tid=56558#pid535643

...so I don't loose the links to my rides again hehehe

jenz58 Postal Menace

9,121 posts · joined Aug 2002 · 5 Jan 2006, 5:03 pm

#444310

OMG this could become addictive 😂

OOPS there was a formula :jesus

Shit happens :rudolf

[ Edited on 5-1-2006 by jenz58 ]

"All you need is trust and a little bit of pixie dust!"

http://forums.aussieveedubbers.com/viewtopic.php?tid=22473
http://forums.aussieveedubbers.com/viewtopic.php?tid=56558#pid535643

...so I don't loose the links to my rides again hehehe

pi22api22a Officially Full-On Dubber

345 posts · joined Nov 2003 · 5 Jan 2006, 8:43 pm

#444400

OK, sorry for the delay (much heated discussion about winner),,,

Thanks to everyone for your entry, I can't believe how much response this got!

But the winner is..............

bugeyedbabe !!!!

My car is Edith
Little buggar stole my heart
now she mine i smile

Congrats,, send me your address and I'll post off you luxury prize!!!

Special mention to PurpleMartin with his entry
(you nearly won with that one)
dak dak dak dak dak
dak dak dak dak dak dak dak
dak dak dak dak dak

and to twoguns,,,
(you were close, but 5, 7, 5,,)
split screen shows my soul. (5)
character, feeling, style. (6)
expressed in my ride (5)

Cheers all,, and thanks
daaave:beer

PrettyBlueBug Almost over it...

2,032 posts · joined May 2005 · 6 Jan 2006, 7:10 am

#444513

Awww.... congrats bugeyedbabe!! :kiss Definitely a worthy winner.

bugeyedbabe Wheres her VW heart on her sleeve

3,945 posts · joined Jan 2005 · 6 Jan 2006, 9:38 am

#444567

thank you thank you...

lol

I honestly didnt think i had any chance of winning considering some of the entries. I especially loved two guns, and the multiples place in by some of the others.....it was nice to see so many positive things being posted.

And I only jumped on here today to see which of you guys won.

but thanks anyway.

btw...edith really does make me smile :P

dubless. 🥲
🥷 And who the helled parked the Mitsubishi "Prancer" under my house??? 🥷